The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The given pie charts show and compare 
water
 consumption for three different purposes in San Diego, California and the world as a whole. 
Overall
, we can see that water
 was used most for households in San Diego and California, whereas
 the agricultural segment has the biggest percentage of global use. 
San Diego County residents use most of their water
 usage
 for housing needs, at around 60%, which is followed by industrial demand for about 23% of the total. The remaining percentage is used for agricultural purposes at exactly 17%. In contrast
, this
 figure ranks first among other proportions of worldwide use, at 69%. 
Regarding global water
 consumption, its usage
 for domestic needs accounted for only 8% reaching the lowest number among other fields which is only one-sixth of the entire world's industrial usage
. California is the only region which has slightly the same percentages in each field. Residential usage
 comes first with 39%, followed by industrial needs with 33%, and ending with its agriculture water
 usage
 which accounted for just under 30%.Submitted by cice
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