One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.

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My name is Teens Potsy, your next-door neighbour and I am writing to inform you that your son, Timmy, accidentally broke the front passenger window of my brand new Volks Wagon Golf

while

playing cricket yesterday afternoon. As you know it is rainy season now and

this

also

affects the situation since I am not able to use the car because of the broken window. Hopefully, your car insurance will cover the damage. Please check with them to see if it can cover. If so, please inform me in time. Perhaps we could meet

this

Sunday afternoon to discuss our options. In case you are not available at that time please let me know so that we would be able to make an appointment for some other time. Thank you in advance for your kind. Yours Sincerely, Teens Potsy

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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One of your neighbor’s children has accidentally broken the front window of your car. You should write a letter to his/her parents and in your letter you should • introduce yourself • explain how it happened • and what they should do.

The Greeting

Today, the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?

These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

Computer have changed the way people study. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computers as study aids?

Some people think that watching TV programmes can help children’s development while others disagree. What is your opinion?

The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.