ou have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Neighbour, I am Lakshmi I lives on the sixth floor of the same community past 2 months. I would like to invite you to my birthday party held on

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Saturday evening at 7'0 clock in the community hall.

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,I would like to inform you that the celebration ends at 2'o clock which may cause some noise disturbance to some of our neighbours because all my classmates are attending the party.

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, in our ,neighbourhood many senior citizens are living so if any of the activities disturb our people that's my sincere apologies for any inconvenience. At

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party we are conducting different activities like cake cutting, dancing, ramp walking,and some games for all ages.

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those who participate and win in the games got surprising prizes too. I would like to invite all the community people to attend the dinner and get some refreshments and have some dinner

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. I look forward to meeting you at the celebration. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Lakshmi, PH:23611211234.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sat Mar 11 2023

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