People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming communities. What are the possible causes and solutions ?

#people #neighbours #communities

In the present year, many

people

are not communicating with others

such

as their communities. And it is a big

problem

for many areas now. In my opinion, I think problems come from social change over many years

such

as the development of technology and others.

This

essay will give the reason and how to solve a

problem

. The first idea that comes to mind is many

people

are only focusing on their life

such

as work and money

therefore

, there do not interested in other

people

for example

, they always come back home late that why there to not have time to talk with their neighbours.

Second,

technology can make the world change someone prefer to meet

people

from social media and enjoy doing everything online like online shopping or ordering food online so, there never meet

people

around their house. In ,contrast technology is making life easier but sociability can be changed.

Moreover

this

situation is very increasing in many nations and it is a very big

problem

for government to solve it. I saw many countries try to stop

this

problem

by supporting humans in communities to contact each other in their local areas.

To sum up

, I totally believe that many

people

are very different from the past. Many teenagers very believe in themself and enjoy living alone

that

Correct pronoun usage

which

show examples

is why there do not want to meet others.They have social only the internet and meet

people

on the internet not in the real life that it is very dangerous for everyone.

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People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming communities. What are the possible causes and solutions ?

Fully explain your ideas

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