People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming communities. What are the possible causes and solutions ?

In the present year, many
people
are not communicating with others
such
as their communities. And it is a big
problem
for many areas now. In my opinion, I think problems come from social change over many years
such
as the development of technology and others.
This
essay will give the reason and how to solve a
problem
. The first idea that comes to mind is many
people
are only focusing on their life
such
as work and money
therefore
, there do not interested in other
people
for example
, they always come back home late that why there to not have time to talk with their neighbours.
Second,
technology can make the world change someone prefer to meet
people
from social media and enjoy doing everything online like online shopping or ordering food online so, there never meet
people
around their house. In ,contrast technology is making life easier but sociability can be changed.
Moreover
,
this
situation is very increasing in many nations and it is a very big
problem
for government to solve it. I saw many countries try to stop
this
problem
by supporting humans in communities to contact each other in their local areas.
To sum up
, I totally believe that many
people
are very different from the past. Many teenagers very believe in themself and enjoy living alone
that
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is why there do not want to meet others.They have social only the internet and meet
people
on the internet not in the real life that it is very dangerous for everyone.
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