The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Given is the graph comparing the ways of utilization of noxious garbage in the Republic of
Korea
,
Sweden
and the UK.In general, there are five methods of
this
process. As data suggests, in
Korea
and
Sweden
waste
is utilized by recycling, incineration and by digging it in. Looking into details, approximately half of garbage in
Sweden
is buried underground,
while
in the Korean Republic - only a quarter of it.
However
,
Korea
is a leader in recycling(69%),
whereas
only fourth part of
overall
deleterious
waste
in
Sweden
is reprocessed. The least popular in these two countries is destroying
waste
by fire: only 9 % In
Korea
and one-fifth share in
Sweden
. Turning to Great Britain, the majority of its harmful
waste
is utilized in landfills(82 %),
whereas
only 2 % are incinerated. It is worth noting that The United Kingdom is
also
using two additional methods: dumping in the sea and chemical treatment ( 8% and 8 % respectively).
Overall
, there were five utilization methods mentioned, amongst which recycling was the most developed in
Korea
,
whereas
in
Sweden
and Great Britain the majority of poisonous
waste
is buried underground.
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