The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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Given is the graph comparing the ways of utilization of noxious garbage in the Republic of

Korea

Sweden

and the UK.In general, there are five methods of

this

process. As data suggests, in

Korea

and

Sweden

waste

is utilized by recycling, incineration and by digging it in. Looking into details, approximately half of garbage in

Sweden

is buried underground,

while

in the Korean Republic - only a quarter of it.

However

Korea

is a leader in recycling(69%),

whereas

only fourth part of

overall

deleterious

waste

Sweden

is reprocessed. The least popular in these two countries is destroying

waste

by fire: only 9 % In

Korea

and one-fifth share in

Sweden

. Turning to Great Britain, the majority of its harmful

waste

is utilized in landfills(82 %),

whereas

only 2 % are incinerated. It is worth noting that The United Kingdom is

also

using two additional methods: dumping in the sea and chemical treatment ( 8% and 8 % respectively).

Overall

, there were five utilization methods mentioned, amongst which recycling was the most developed in

Korea

whereas

Sweden

and Great Britain the majority of poisonous

waste

is buried underground.

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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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