The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the sum of visitors to Ashdown museum one year before and after it was refurbished. The pie charts summarise a study done to know how satisfied one was after the visit at the same two periods.
Overall
, the popularity and satisfaction were higher after the refurbishment. The amount of non-respondents to the survey remains de same over the two years.
Visitors to the museum grew to more than 15 000 at the time of its changes. Whereas
people that were very dissatisfied lower just about 5% in the following year, the very satisfied grew by 20% making one of the biggest growth after the dissatisfied fell from 40% to 15%. There were no big changes for the satisfied and no response groups. The first just dropped 5% and the latter remained at the same percentage.Submitted by arlindanobredeceita on
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