A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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I am glad to hear from you again. Hope you and your family are well. I heard that you'

be going

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a camping holiday for the first time

this

summer. Have you chosen a place yet? If not, I'

recommend

you

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a place called Angel

Island

which is located in southern Thailand. I'm sure that you'

thanking

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for

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my recommended place. The

island

is so beautiful and the water is so clean.

Although

there'

usually be a lot of people during summer, a dozen of good spots you still can choose for camping along the

island

Moreover

, at night, you can easily see panorama views of the very clear sky from the beach. You'

never forget that views. I'd like to remind you

something

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as well. It is about mosquitos. Whatever insects from

this

island

are so huge.

Therefore

, do not forget to bring some lotions for mosquitos, and

also

some tablets to prevent

from

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catching a cold. So windy at the beach especially during the night. I would like to come with you on

this

trip but I'm too busy

this

summer I have an important exam and I have to stay at home and study for that but I am waiting for your feedback about

this

adventure. Hope you enjoy your camping trip. Mohammad jeddinia

Submitted by mohammad.jeddinia on Sun Mar 05 2023

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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The Greeting

Many university students have part-time jobs while they study. Is this a good or a bad thing?

When international media convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?

Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?