You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 word

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Dear Mr Collins, I am writing

this

letter in regard to an advertisement that you have given in the weekly magazine

last

week . I would prefer

this

babysitter

job

because I have done my master's in Pediatrics and child psychology back in India .So it would help me to accomplish my experience in my field

job

. To elaborate on why I am appropriate for

this

job

, I would say , I have vast knowledge about child behavioural patterns and their nutritional requirements .

Moreover

, I have experience in the same field for more than two years as I was working with an organisation that cares for children in the aspect of their mental and physical development .

Furthermore

, I have heard from my friend about the spellbinding sights and scenic beauty of different places in Australia.

Therefore

, if I would have the chance to pursue my

job

there it would fulfil my two desires of working in my interested

job

as well as

exploring new places . To add on , my cousin is

also

living there , so in my vacant time from my work I would spend my time with her . I will look forward to your reply .Please feel free to contact me if you need any details. yours sincerely, Sandeep

Submitted by sandeepjatana1997 on Wed Mar 01 2023

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