You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia. Write at lease 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am writing

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regards

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to an

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advertisement

that you have given in

weekly

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the weekly

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magazine

last

week . I would prefer

myself

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apply

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for

this

baby sitter

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babysitter

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job

,

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apply

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because

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I

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have done my

masters

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in Pediatrics and child psychology back

to

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in

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India .So it would help me to accomplish my experience in my field

job

. To elaborate

why

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on why

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i

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am appropriate for

this

job

,

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would say , I have vast knowledge about child behavioural

patterens

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patterns

and their nutritional requirements .

Moreover

,

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have experience in the same field for more than two years as

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was working with

the

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organisation

who

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cares for

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the child

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child

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children

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in

aspect

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of their

mantal

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mental

and physical development .

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,

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have heard from my friend about the spellbinding sights and scenic beauty of different places in Australia.

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, if

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would have

chance

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to pursue my

job

their

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there

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it would fulfil my two desires of working in my interested

job

as well as

to explore

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new places . To add on , my cousin is

also

living there , so in my vacant time from my work

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would spend my time with her . I will look forward

for

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your reply . Regards, Sandeep.