Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I share the view that all
children
around the world need to study another
one
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language
except
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their own
language
to help them communicate with people in
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other countries,
also
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help them to develop their personal and professional skills. Personally, I absolutely agree that
this
is necessary for
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of
children
. For a variety of reasons, it would be better if
school
children
will learn
in addition
of
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to
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their native
language
other international.
Firstly
, it
is need
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for them because if they will know
new
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a new
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language
new opportunities will open up before them,
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extend the list of universities where they can study.
Secondly
, it will be easier to travel around the world when they will grow up
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because
the
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international
language
like English is used almost everywhere.
For example
, in the almost
in
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all parts of the world people know international
language
like English
Finally
, it is always useful for
brain
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and
human’s
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memory, when they learn new languages. In my opinion, studying of
new
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language
has a beneficial effect
for
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children
’s
mind
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,
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and future abilities in their life.
For instance
, I have a friend from
the
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school
time who simultaneously with
school
subjects studied English during
the
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all period of
school
.
As a result
, he passed the exams
to
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the university in the USA. And now he is studying
in
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the local university in Texas state. In conclusion, I support the idea that it is excellent for
children
to learn another
language
aside from their own,
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will be positive and beneficial for their future life.
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