You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell him which team won • Describe the weather conditions that day • Say how you felt about the match

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Dear Sam, I hope you are getting better now. Anyway, I will visit you tomorrow. Just wanted to inform you that our team "NASAR Football club" has won the match.

Firstly

, I know that you are curious to know about the contest conclusion Because you were in the hospital at that time and were unable to see our progress during the match. Excited to inform you that we won the competition with 10/9 scores from the "Sheer Football Club". The winning prize has been divided among the team and we

also

take out your share. Talking about the weather, It was a sunny day and the temperature was about 38 Degrees celsius. We drank a lot of water during the match because of the huge sweat.

Finally

, the game was very interesting especially

at the end

while

required to make only one score to win. Suddenly, our captain took the lead and put the ball

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their court. everybody at the stadium was cheering up. I hope you too enjoyed the situation by

this

letter. see you tomorrow. Yours lovingly, Mandeep Singh

Submitted by mandeepsinghsony2022 on Mon Feb 27 2023

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