Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Animals
are kept in
zoos
all around the world.
Zoos
are used as a tourist
attraction
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by most countries which requires wild
animals
of different species to be present there, I think
zoos
are not a place to keep wild
animals
and they should be kept in their natural habitat. There are many reasons
as to
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why
the
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animals
should be kept in their natural habitat and not in
the
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zoos
,
first
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they are a precious gift of God
who
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thrive
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in
natural
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environment
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with challenges and celebrations. They should be kept in animal parks or safari where they can feel less caged and freer. We don't need
zoos
to appreciate the beauty of these creatures, they can be seen over the internet or
people
can visit their countries to have a look at them and feel happy for them in their natural environment.
Moreover
,
zoos
take advantage of animal misery and make money from it which is why
zoos
should be closed and govt. should act against them rather than
earning
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money from
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.
However
, many
people
think
zoos
are an excellent place to educate their children about wild
animals
and their behaviour. They are a safe place for wild
animals
and these
animals
can be protected
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and avoid extinction.
In addition
to
this
people
also
feel that
zoos
are a positive way to earn money and tourism.
For example
, in
Sydney
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many tourists frequently visit the Taronga zoo. In conclusion,
people
feel that
zoos
are good places to keep wild
animals
. I believe
zoos
should close we don't need
animals
to suffer because of us, we can look for these wild
animals
and their behaviour over the internet or travel to them and be happy for these creatures living in their natural habitat. We must close all
zoos
in the future.
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