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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie charts compare the proportion of
water
 consumption for industrial , agricultural and domestic
usage
 in the six different countries , which were measured in percentage. In general , out of six nations ; four of them used most of their
water
 for agricultural purposes.
Whereas
 , for the other two , it was for industrial
usage
. To be specific, in
compared
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 to
those four-nation
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; who used
water
 for agriculture ; Central Asia accounted for
most
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 and it constituted 88% of that sector.
While
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other three countries utilised 84%, 81% and 71% of
water
 for agricultural purposes respectively. Meanwhile ,
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 two areas made up the least
water
usage
 in those four nations and it constituted 5% to 12% for industrial purposes.
Whereas
 , for domestic ,
usage
 it was 19% and 99% for South America and Africa .
While
 Central Asia and South East Asia made up the same ratio of 7%. Meanwhile , Europe and North America were the countries that used most of their
water
 for
industrial
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 sector and it was 48% and 53% respectively .
However
 , for
other
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 two sectors , it was 39% and 32% for agriculture .
While
 for domestic , it was almost a minority .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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