The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the

points

earned by three different

teams

and C, in four consecutive seasons from 2002 to 2005. It is evident that

team

scored by far the most in every season,

while

team

A got minor

points

in total. In 2002,

while

team

scored 82

points

, the highest of all time in 4 seasons,

teams

A and C got only a few

points

(5 and 10, respectively). The

score

team

fell to 60 in 2003, and

teams

A and C experienced a tiny increase,

although

they remained far lower than

team

. There was significant growth in

team

A’s

score

in 2004, to 35

points

, seven times higher than in 2002.

On the other hand

team

’s

score

again noticeably decreased by 17

points

at the same time,

whereas

team

C’s

score

marginally fell by 3

points

However

, the season of 2005 was a turnover, when

team

’s

score

rocketed to 55

points

team

A’s

score

markedly fell back to 8

points

, and

team

C’s

score

declined to 5. Anyhow,

team

got by far the most

points

among the three

teams

in every season.

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