do you agree or disagree with the following statement it is a waste of money for governments fo fund space travel of space exploration

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traveling
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to
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a
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waste
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of time. On the other side, others believed that it is a good way to
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the universe. In my opinion, I agree with
this
statement. I will explain my viewpoints in detail in the ensuing paragraph. Discovering
space
is crucial for developing country,
for example
, Nasa is a specific company in The US, that make many journeys to
space
, Which help them in
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exploring
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the earth,
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as
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whether
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will be raining heavily or slowly, in earlier today.
Moreover
, Nasa, use
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of GPS,
this
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will detect any point clearly from
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distance,
such
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they can find him easily by
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his location in a few seconds.
As a result
, it is important to fund
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this
for developing and exploring in next future, which can make
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for
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human
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more
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.
On the other hand
, some
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consider
that is
a
wastage
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of
money
,
bacause
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because
of the high cost.
for instance
, it would be better to spend
money
on
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education or
puplic
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public
health rather than exploring
space
, which will cost the institute and,
hence
, affects
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of people.
To conclude
, Without spending
money
to explore
space
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progress will stop,
hence
, we have to spend more
money
to see and discover the
univere
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universe
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