you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in it's head office in another country. write a letter to your manager. In your letter: . explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months . say how your work could be done while you're away . ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear sir I am writing you

this

letter to express my wish to

work

in the company's head office in Canada for six months. I

work

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team leader in Egypt's office and

although

I love my team and the country, I wish to

work

in the head office in Canada. I believe

this

opportunity should be taken as I have been one of the best employees in the company for the past 2 years.

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I have some relatives in Canada that I have not visited since I joined the company. As for my

work

, I am sure that it can be done online via Zoom meetings. I was hoping you could write a letter to recommend me for

this

opportunity. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully,

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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 7.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 8.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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