The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients
The charts illustrate the average proportion of
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar in general meals in the USA, all of which probably caused health issues if consumed in huge numbers.
Overall
, the meal that not only contains the highest of three
nutrients
but
also
accounted for the largest amount of
sodium
is dinner.
On the other hand
, lunch could categorize as a healthy meal because its proportion has the smallest in all types of
nutrients
. Dinner is responsible for the greatest quantity of all
nutrients
,particularly
sodium
43%, saturated fat 37% and added carbohydrates 23%. The second is snacks which have the biggest volume of added sugar 42% followed by fat and
sodium
which are 21% and 14% respectively. Lunch is ranked third. It almost consists of two
nutrients
which are 29% of
sodium
and 26% of saturated fat. The
last
is breakfast. It has the same portion of added sugar and saturated fat (16%) and less than 2% of
sodium
.
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