The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of activities 5-14-years-olds do in their free time.
Overall
, Watching TV is the leader of activities for both genders.Boys
tend to do more activities during their free time except
Add the preposition
forexcept
art
and watching TV. For the girls, skateboarding is the last
one and the boys
do skateboarding and art
for the same amount of participation and these are the least ones for the boys
.
The boys
participate 100 per cent
in watching television and computer games are the second one with 80 per cent
of participants. Last
one for the Correct article usage
The last
boys
is art
and skateboarding with 40 per cent
.Boys
are participating more than girls nearly 10 per cent
for each activity besides
art
and watching videos.
However
, the girls same as boys
100 per cent
of them participate the watching tv activity. They are participating more than nearly 15 per cent
in art
and craft.Skateboarding is the least with 30 per cent
of participants.Submitted by erenar3 on
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