The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart demonstrates why causes agricultural
land
produces less than before survey years. The table illustrates how
deforestation
, over-cultivation, and over-grazing affected three regions (North
America
,
Europe
, and
Oceania
) in the 1990s.
Overall
, Over-grazing is the main reason which makes
land
degrade
while
other reasons only need to take less responsibility for
this
.
On the other hand
, in
Europe
, 23% of
land
faces the problem of degradation but only 5% of
land
in North
America
has
this
environmental problem. To face the question of which
land
over the world is degraded, we can see over-grazing takes the biggest proportion, 35%,
whereas
deforestation
and over-cultivation only maintain 30 % and 28%. Another reason which causes
land
degradation only takes 7%. The
land
of
Europe
has 23% faced
land
degradation
while
the
land
of North
America
and
Oceania
only takes 5% and 13% respectively.
Deforestation
is caused 9.8% of the
land
in
Europe
to be less productive. In contrast, only 0.2% of
deforestation
happened in North
America
while
there is only 1.7% in
Oceania
. There is 7.7% of
Europe
's
land
degraded by over-cultivation
while
0% and 3.3% in
Oceania
and North
America
. 11.3% of
Oceania
's
land
faces the issue of over-grazing
whereas
North
America
and
Oceania
have only 5.5% and 1.5% of
land
become weaker and weaker respectively.
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