You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain that unsatisfied things taken place in your hotel

last

week.

Also

, I hope to solve it soon, better give me some part of refund if you accept. I checked in your reception

last

Friday night, at 8:00 pm. At that time, the receptionist recommended a double bedroom to me. She said a 10% discount to me when I checked my personal information with her. Unfortunately, there was continually leaked water on the top of my head from 2:00am to 4:00am in the morning of

last

Saturday. I could not even sleep for a minute. When the water entered my room, I called to the reception directly but I got answer disappointedly. She told me that the maintenance engineer had day-off at weekends. So I had to wait until the early morning on

this

Monday.

This

problem did not get solved and I wasted my sleeping time exactly. If you fully understand and would help solve it well, I would have a 50% refund of a day's room charge. I hope

this

issue will be not happened again because most people could visit here frequently. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jackson

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Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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