The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The provided pie charts illustrate the average proportions in terms of three types of nutrition (

sodium

, saturated fat,

sugar

) in four meal types (

breakfast

, lunch,

dinner

snacks

) in the USA.

Overall

, people have consumed higher proportions of

sugar

and fat for

dinner

while

having much

sugar

for

snacks

Besides

, the least percentage of all three nutrients have been used for

breakfast

Firstly

, the highest percentage of

sodium

is used in

dinner

which is accounted for 43%. Meanwhile, the lowest of 14%

sodium

is included in morning dishes

as well as

snacks

. At lunchtime, people consumed 29% of

sodium

On the other hand

, the highest percentage of oil is used in

dinner

which is 37% and the lowest is for

breakfast

which is 16%. For lunch and

snacks

Add a comma

,snacks

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Fox has eaten oil at 21% and 26% respectively.In terms of extra

sugar

, 42% is included in

snacks

while

23% in

dinner

However

, folks have used 19% of added

sugar

in the afternoon meal.

Finally

, the lowest of 16% of

sugar

was consumed in

breakfast

meals.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Many people believe that a person’s culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that it has only minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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