some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research

Nowadays, many
people
assume that finding out the origin of the either
house
or building , where they live is an attractive thing . Personally , I believe that opinion is really accurate .
Firstly
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this
since if
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owner has details
that
is
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sufficient about where they live , resident tend to love
this
place more or avoid something
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to
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theirs
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. These will help
people
to make some decisions which bring safety or luck and eradicate bad issues . So
owner
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have enough time to decide should or shouldn’t live together .
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, if the answer is not
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, which solutions are going to be carried out and adapted for longer
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There are many ways to know how
building
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was constructed and established , but the easiest solution is asking
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relatives
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somebody
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of somebody
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who witnessed the building
up
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, they seem to be
ancestor
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and
adult
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adults
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. But so
much
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present
house
that is
used for
commercial
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problem , renting or keeping as property for the future . And when
people
who rent these like office ,
house
or more and want to know about what is the history that happened in
this
place .The best way to
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up with things is before planning
for
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to
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choose and live ,
citizen
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consider and know obviously about
the
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history . In circumstances owner really
don’t
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want to share
for
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you , refusing and cancelling
by
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anyway
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is perhaps the best solution for self to prevent dangers
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in the near future ,
instead
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that no disadvantage appears . In conclusion , the major
people
nowadays look
the
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house
like
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as
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the most important place , so knowing clearly about
that is
really a necessary part of normal life .
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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