Some people think that it's good for a country's culture if people watch some imported film or TV programs while some people argue that it could be better if people watch films of their own culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A portion of

people

support

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that watching

foreign

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a foreign

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film and

programs are good for a

country

culture

whereas

the

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others debate that watching national

films

are better. In my opinion, watching

films

from various sources including

people

's own

culture

is the best for a

country

culture

. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss both of their views and support my opinion. First of all, foreign

shows give

people

a wide view of

habits

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the habits

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and activities of different cultures. To illustrate, they can learn about other

culture

's food

habit

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habits

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, social norms, history, fashion,

constitution

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and constitution

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and

this

knowledge can be introduced

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into

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their own

culture

For example

, by watching a Norwegian

series about the Vikings, I come to know about their history and

culture

also

the

english

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series named 'Friends' gives me

the

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vivid idea of

80s

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the 80s

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and 90s New York city life.

On the other hand

, watching

own

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their own

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cultural

films

engage

people

with cultural views and norms and help them to respect and sustain these values. To demonstrate, national television shows are

containted

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contained

contented

with information, social up and downs,

good

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the good

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and bad side of many contemporary

situation

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situations

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These

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helps

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help

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people

to be aware of the

country

's urgency. Like, once there was a tragic

activites

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activity

going on

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in my

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country

, throwing acid

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girls. National

shows created awareness about

this

hyenas

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acts and

applicable

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the applicable

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punishment of

this

deed. In conclusion, watching foreign

films

shape one's

culture

introducting

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introducing

norms and activities from other's

culture

. It

also

create

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respect

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for

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others

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others'

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belief.

However

, national shows help

people

to attach

with

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national issues and matters.

Also

, it reminds them

their

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of their

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own

culture

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views and not to divert from

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them

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drastically.

That is

why

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apply

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my opinion is to watch

films

show

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shows

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from all the sources available including one's own

culture

for

culture

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cultural

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development.

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