The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the use of
the
fuel in the USA from 1980 to 2030.
Correct article usage
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Overall
, Petrol and Oil have a huge lead on consumption the usage
of Petrol and Oil constantly rising. Coal and Natural Gas stand in second
and third position and steadily fluctuates over time. Meanwhile, Nuclear,Solar and Hydropower
usage
is lowest and steadily the same.
First of all, Petrol and oil tend to rise over time, in the beginning, in 1980, usage
was only 35 quadrillion
units but in the future prediction consumption is nearly 50 quadrillion
units. Natural gas was the second
one in 1980. After 1980, the usage
of coal slightly increased and catches natural gas. For future projections, coal usage
will nearly double and will be the second
one in the energy industry.
Secondly
, In 1980, nuclear, solar and hydropower
used nearly 5 quadrillion
units. Over time, Nuclear takes the lead with over 5 quadrillion
usage
. Solar and Hydropower
fluctuate for a while
but for future predictions solar energy is going to pass hydropower
energy will be second
between the three of them and fifth in general.Submitted by erenar3 on
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