Children all over the world should learn to speak a single, universal language fluently in addition to their native language. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Globalization is increasing all of the time so there are many good reasons why young

people

need to speak a second

language

so that we can all communicate together and understand other

people

However

, there may

also

be some problems with

this

idea that we should consider them. First of all,

children

could communicate with

people

from other countries. More precisely, when they grow up, they can work in international companies. Through

language

learning,

children

could broaden their views and be more open to different cultures. To be specific, they can understand and collaborate with

people

from other cultures easily.

As a result

, the world will have greater prosperity and perhaps we can achieve global peace as well.

In addition

, there is scientific evidence that learning a second

language

is good for brain development.

Finally

, in my school in China,

children

are required to learn English, and most of them enjoy it and want to learn so

this

is a positive activity.

However

, it is not a good way to force

children

to learn one

language

Secondly

, there are many different languages in the world and

this

is the variety of human life. The best universal

language

' in my region, Asia, may not be the best one in a different region of the world, so we need to be flexible. In conclusion, it is inevitable that English has become the 'universal

language

Children

get many benefits from learning a second

language

at school, but maybe they should be able to choose which

language

they learn, and

this

might depend on what culture they come from.

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