You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, • Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am Rustamova Laylo I used a removal

company

to help me move my belongings.

However

, some of my things were damaged in the move.

For

this

reason, I am writing

this

letter to complain about my things which should repair. Now I am afraid that I have to ask you to change them with another one. Well,I heard about your removal

company

from my older brother who advised me to choose

this

company

because of its good services.

For

this

reason, I would prefer to choose your

company

However

, during the move, some of my furniture

such

as the TV and fridge is damaged. After coming to our new house, I wanted to relax.

For

this

reason, I turned on the TV. But I found that the Tv was not working well

as well as

other furniture like a fridge. I think the best solution for

this

problem is to change them for new ones. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. Yours faithfully, Rustamova Laylo Laylo Rustamova

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