You play a team sport with some friends. Last week, a memver of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

Dear Kate, How are you? Trust you are feeling pretty well. I'm ecstatic to write to you about the outcome of the final competition which stopped you from joining us
as a result
of
the
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recent injuries.
Firstly
, it will gladden your heart that our
team
finally
won the match and received the national prize of ten thousand dollars. I vividly remembered your prediction about the
sport
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activity and everything turns out exactly. It's so magical.
Secondly
, when the
team
realized that you won't be available to join the game, everyone felt so nervous and afraid that
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going to
loose
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the match,
however
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Furthermore
. I really missed your presence as we would have given more scores against the other
team
and even finished on time without going through a draw.
Additionally
, I felt so happy being part of the school
team
as I have garnered more skills and tricks from your
assitance
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assistance
. Thank you so much and I wish you
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recovery. Best wishes, Remy
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