You play a team sport with some friends. Last week, a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

Dear Kate, How are you? Trust you are feeling pretty well. I'm ecstatic to write to you about the outcome of the final competition which stopped you from joining us
as a result
of your recent injuries.
Firstly
, it will gladden your heart that our team
finally
won the match and received the national prize of ten thousand dollars.
In addition
, I vividly remembered your prediction about the sports activity and everything turned out exactly,
thus
, making
this
year's competition extremely magical.
Secondly
, when the team realized that you won't be available to join the game, everyone felt so nervous and afraid that we were going to lose the match,
however
with a perfect replacement and encouragement from our coach, we came out victorious.
Furthermore
, I really missed your presence as we would have gotten more scores against the other squad and even finished on time without going into a draw.
Additionally
, I felt so happy being a part of the school team as I have garnered more skills and tricks from your assistance and I really want to appreciate your kind gesture. Get well soon buddy. Best wishes, Remy
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