You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

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Dear Ravi I am ecstatic to write

this

letter as we won the final match with a phenomenal record score in the history of the tournament despite a few of our team members being injured and performing in the second half with mesmerizing goals. As you know, it was crucial and much-needed to win the match.

In addition

, we have enormous encouragement from spectators throughout the match and I cannot think of it in my dream.

Finally

, everyone in the team showed up their talent and contributed efforts and make

this

day very special and memorable for the entire community. I was blown away after the grand victory and I really missed your presence and contribution. In fact, if you would have been played the match we would have finished the game a few hours early.

nevertheless

, it was tough and enjoyed the day right from the beginning onwards. I cannot wait anymore to share

this

good news with you and we all look forward to seeing you on the ground with full capacity of fitness. I wish you a very speedy recovery and see you soon. Take care..!! Best regards Lakshmi

Submitted by lakshma999 on Mon Feb 13 2023

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