You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Hi Sir, I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention towards an advertisement posted by you in one of the Australian Magazine for accommodation, and take responsibility for your child. I am excited to apply for

this

job

Firstly

, to apply for

this

job

, I would like to mention that I love children too much.

Due to

this

behavioural trait, I did a Nanny course four years back from one of the recognised colleges in

Australia

Subsequently

, I had two years of experience in a daycare academy too within

Australia

. Unfortunately,

due to

some emergency in my back home, I left the

job

. But now, I'm coming back to

Australia

, on the 5th of the next month.

This

job

really works for me as living space is

also

provided by you, so it would escape me from the botheration of finding out rental space outside

while

moving to

Australia

Furthermore

, my relevant experience in the childcare field would really be benefitted to you and your family. To know about my behaviour at work, you can contact my previous employer Ms Rozy D'Souza Day Care Facility, contact no. 662-115-1000, or email [email protected] And my employment details are Lisa Liberty (employee ID 7264411). I will be looking forward to your positive response at the earliest. Yours Sincerely, Lisa.

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The Greeting

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Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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The Greeting

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