You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter - Explain why you would like the job - give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ - say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Mr James, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in the advertisement I saw related to the requirement for a caretaker for a kid.
Firstly
, I would like to emphasize that I'm eager to join your family since I am an extroverted person and can easily adjust to any family by adapting to their habits and nature.
Secondly
, I have studied psychology and know how to handle kids and communicate with them
while
maintaining a healthy relationship with them. Another ground is that I have many nephews and nieces which makes it relevantly easier for me to have good relations with the kids.
Also
, for my leisure
time
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I have decided to visit tourist places in Australia, especially the Opera House in Sydney. It has always been my dream to visit there.
Furthermore
, I have decided to take cooking classes and learn to make Asian cuisine. I am hoping to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Sana
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