the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing
Three
pie charts and a table illustrate the information on imported fish
between 1988 and 2000 - the table shows the total value
of billions of dollar
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dollars
three
different years while
the three
pie charts show the source of fish
imported to the US.
Overall
, It can be seen from the data that the total imported value
in the year 2000 is the highest while
, in 1988 is the lowest. Moreover
,It is noticeable that Canada is the most source of imported fish
to the US in 1988 but other sources exceed to occupy most of both years.
In 1988, the value
of fish
imported to the US is 6.57 billion Dollars, the lease of three
years and then
the imported value
increased gradually to 8.52 and 10.72 billion Dollars in 1992 and 2000 respectively.
Interestingly, although
imported fish
from Cannada occupy the most proportion of sources is 60% in 1988, In 1992 and 2000 it is
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