Space travel is fantastic these days, but there are many issues, such as environmental problems, that we should be focusing on. What are your views on the allocation of public funding?

Travelling to space is trending these days, but environment and funding are
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creating some problems.
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essay will focus on both the issues and solutions for the same. Nowadays many
scienctist
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scientists
scientist
are interested to find
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life
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another planet and
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to travel to space, but
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can create a problem
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surronding
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surrounding
surroundings
and financial issues
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humans. To go
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search
of
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lives
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other planet
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, more and more time and energy
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required to spend on the process.
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process may
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our environment,
for instance
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scientist
launch
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the
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rocket, it
produce
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the
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balck
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black
smoke. In the making of that rocket, lots of finance is required, and government take
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money from the taxes paid by the citizens.
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if they are planning to go to space, they will work on the budget and
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they will recover the same amount from the citizens. Some possible
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to
this
problem are protecting the climate by launching
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rockets in
such
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surroundings
which are far from human beings.
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government should start a kind of scheme where people can donate if they want to or else they should ask for the help at international level.
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and people should not be
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affected
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, but still
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should be developed
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simultaneously
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