You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in connection with the experience I get, after attending cookery classes at your institute. It was a wonderful time that I spent over there. Regarding my
course
, what attracts me the most is the huge attention of the staff members towards their students. Other than
this
, diverse techniques taught by the teachers to cook a specific dish are unique in nature, which helps me to make a variety of snacks at home. As I have earned a lot of confidence, by joining your batch, I cook regularly in the evening, especially during snack time. My family, in fact, now loves Chinese snacks cooked by me, which gives me a feeling of satisfaction.
Last
week, I made Italian starters for my friends, and everyone praised me a lot.
Apart from
this
, I am
keen
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keenly
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looking forward to learning the main
course
so that I could master that portion of cookery too. If possible, try to initiate
such
a
course
so that my kids would start eating homemade food rather than street meals. Thank you for
such
a useful
course
. Yours faithfully, Yogita Gupta
Submitted by Yogita  on

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