The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas

The given diagram illustrates the steps of building a storage area using concrete canvas. Looking from an

overall

perspective it is readily obvious that

this

production consists of seven major steps,starting from manufacturing primary units and ending in establishing storage spaces.

Firstly

, the basic unit is produced using three materials, a watered-proof layer,dry concrete and a fibrous top surface and they are incorporated to produce the end product .

Then

they are folded as blocks and once they are ready to deliver distribution takes place to the required area.After unwrapping the three layers,it is spread in the ground using a rope attached to a vehicle and pegged into the land to avoid folding back and to keep it in position.Next , the air is inflated inside it converting the block into a spacious tent.After reconstructing it into a tent it is around 8meteres in height and

then

water is splashed to the outermost covering.Settling the construction takes 20-24 hours and

then

it is ready for the store.

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