You recently did a short cookery course.The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Writing a letter to the course director at the cookery school.Hn yoour letter . describe what you enjoed about the course . say how much cooking you have done since the course . suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer

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Dear Miss Pooja, I am writing

this

letter to give you my feedback about the cookery class that I completed recently under your supervision. I am quite satisfied with my initial cooking module because I enjoyed it a lot

due to

the supportive nature of all my colleagues .

Also

, it was fun to share our food recipes with each other in the classroom. You taught us all the recipes in a very easy way and I learned to make many dishes in a short period of time . Now, I master all the basics of cooking and I am able to cook food for myself and for my family members. It would be great if schools will add more culinary courses to their curriculum . I know that one of our class teachers has a great talent for cooking party meals. Can you please ask her to take over the new cooking classes

also

? Hopefully, you will like my feedback on your service and send me more details soon . Yours faithfully , Bandhana.

Submitted by bandhana322 on Wed Feb 08 2023

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