You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

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Dear Mr Jhonson, I am writing

this

letter in regard to the position available in the main office in Dubai. I would like to take that chance to have the opportunity to explore other areas of our company and to prove to you and myself that I am perfect for that. You know that I would be outside of our office here in Sydney but do not worry, I would be continuing on helping in whatever situation would be necessary. I will not let you down! I would try to finish as much work as I can before I leave the office, in case my petition would be accepted. One more thing, I would like to ask you for a letter of recommendation. Even though the position to fill is under the same company, is not in our country so their Manager does not know how I can handle different situations or even how I can work under hard situations. You know that very well! I would really appreciate it if you can do that for me. Kind Regards, Nicolas Arratta

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

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