Most modern families have both parents working as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?
In the 21st century, human life became more complex and
compitative
because of Correct your spelling
competitive
that
Correct determiner usage
apply
parents
spend less amount of time
with their children
. In this
essay, I will discuss detailed
analysis of the reasons and the problems generating Add an article
a detailed
this
issue.
To start with, there are various reasons behind the busy scheduled
of Change the form of the verb
schedule
parents
.Firstly
, the growing number of industries results
enormous battle for profit making.Add the preposition
inresults
fromresults
Therefore
,now employees facing
excessive workload that reduces their leisure Wrong verb form
face
time
with the family. According to
the American psychological association research study on mental health problems among IT professionals (2021) results that 82% of US technical professionals are spending weekly less than 10 hours with their children
. Additionally
, it makes their family disorganized and higher chance
of anonymity among members. Correct article usage
the chance
Secondly
, multimillion companies and their employers now following
a hidden agenda Wrong verb form
follow
such
as long working hours with less time
of
Change preposition
for
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the break
break
and the maximum utilization of their day-Fix the agreement mistake
breaks
time
for money making. For instance
, these business policies clearly change the principles of parenthood.
Although
, aparting
Correct your spelling
a parting
parents
from their children
brings various mental and developmental changes among minors.For example
, it can leads
to depression and anxiety among Change the verb form
lead
children
especially those who have kids below 7 years of age .For instance
, mental stress regenerate
developmental and health issues Change the verb form
regenerates
whereas
adults don't get more time
to reconciliate
. Nowadays, Correct your spelling
reconcile
children
likes
to eat food from outside Change the verb form
like
especially
from fast food restaurant that Add the comma(s)
,especially
supported
by elders because they don't have any Add a missing verb
are supported
time
to cook for their family. This
may cause obesity and many health-related issue
among Change to a plural noun
issues
children
.
To conclude
, having a healthy family relationship is a blessing especially
in Add the comma(s)
,especially
modern
nuclear family.Add an article
a modern
the modern
Therefore
,parents
should keep a balanced life between personal and professional goals for making their future generation to
attain a successful life.Fix the infinitive
apply
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