The table shows information about the numbers of people who took the seven most popular airlines in the US in 1995 and 2005.
the table compares data about the numbers of American people taking the seven different
airlines
from 1995 to 2005.
overall
, it is clear from the table that the number of passengers in all airlines
increased during this
period. the number of people who took jetblue airways showed a
considerable growth.
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years
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the years
of
1995 and 2005 , delta air lines Change preposition
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was
the most popular airway of the seven Change the verb form
were
airlines
, which had 500700 persons
in 1995 and 1064000 persons
in 2005 (a 113% increase). while
the figures for southwest airlines
and united airlines
were in second and third place, they just saw a lower growth rate 96% and 33% each) .
by contrast
, over this
period, the number of passengers who took jetblue airways saw a noticeable increase (249%) , from 86000 to 300000, which was the highest increase among the seven airlines
. especially, its figure for passengers in 2005 overtook the figures for Alaska airlines
(257000 persons
) and Hawaiian Airlines
(250000 persons
).Submitted by 13715019386 on
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