Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged. In your letter, you should say: • Details of how you won the prize • What the prize you are going to get • What actions you expect to be taken.

#editor #newspaper #prize #actions

Dear Sir, I am a regular column writer in your newspaper. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the reward that I won

last

week for the best essay in your newspaper.

One

month ago you published

one

of my essays in your magazine which was about oral hygiene maintenance.

This

subject was greatly appreciated by the readers and the response was astonishing. As per your policy, you decided to give me a prize. The reward was

one

thousand dollars announced

last

week which is still pending. It was supposed to be given within

one

week of the announcement. I was wondering if you could kindly invite me and my family to your company and hand me

this

prize in front of them. I want to make it a memorable event of my life. I will be very thankful for

this

act of kindness. Yours Sincerely, Muhammad Irfan

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Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

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Use an appropriate tone

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Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged. In your letter, you should say: • Details of how you won the prize • What the prize you are going to get • What actions you expect to be taken.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

at the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school.

In some areas of the US , a curefew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?