You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You also still have a few of your friend’s belongings that were left at your house the last time she visited. In your letter include: - Why you are writing - What you’ve been doing since you last spoke together - Apologize for still having the items and ask how you can return them

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Dear Harpreet, How are you? I hope you are doing well. It has been so long since I

last

met you at my house for celebrating my success. Recently I found the items that you left at my house and I was wondering about returning them to you. A lot has happened in my life since the

last

encounter we had. I moved to a different place and I was really busy organising it. On ,top my parents came to visit me for a month and even on professional ,end it has been really hectic. As I unpacking and organising my new house I saw a scarf and watch that belonged to you and I am really apologetic for not being able to return them to you. I would like to arrange to give your belongings back. Again I would like to apologize for

this

, But aside from ,

this

I would really love to catch up with you as it has been so long. On the other ,hand I have missed our fun interactions. I hope to see you soon and I miss you. Warm Wishes Sonam Mehra

Submitted by sonammehra2804 on Thu Feb 02 2023

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