You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

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Hi Paris, Hope you are well. Thank you again for letting me stay at yours, it was

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time for me. :) I am writing

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letter, regarding my documents on

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stick which I believe I left at your house. Could you please check your bottom drawer next to the window ? That was the location I kept all my paperwork and memory stick. It is very important for me, as in

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days I have a meeting with

Client

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I need to present all points from

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a seminar

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attended during my stay at yours. I would like to kindly ask you if you could open my memory stick on your laptop and just forward all information via

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Please let me know ASAP. Thank you again for a beautiful time. I really enjoyed my stay, because of you and especially I will never forget our trip to Sydney haha. Can't wait to see you soon, Love, Martyna

Submitted by martynaa.j on Tue Jan 31 2023

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You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

More and more people are moving away from an agricultureral background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.what will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer.

Not enough student chose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reason for this problem? What's the effects on society?

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?