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🔶More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. 🔸What are the reasons for that? What can we do to make other people do the same?

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In recent years, it is getting popular to hire a personal coach to exercise safely in a gym and
also
people
 are more concerned about what they eat because social media are full of articles written about healthy diets. In
this
 essay, I will express my ideas briefly. On the hand, because the economy has increased and technology has developed,
people
 can afford a better life, and get more information about health. There are several ways to help
people
 get motivation on doing sports and eat well.
For instance
, many social platforms support influencers to record their daily, including the activities they do
on
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 sports or the meals they prepare in general
while
 doing exercise. to inspire followers to keep doing on their way.
Therefore
, influencers
also
 create
some
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apply
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chat groups to make their fans able to discuss with others.
In other words
, they may have common problems
while
 cooking or some difficulties in participating in
acticities
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activities
, and groups can support them
overcome
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 the upset period.
On the other hand
, it is an important part of education within the lessons at school and with families. Though everyone will learn the knowledge at school or
thourgh
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through
 online platforms, it is better to encourage
people
 to follow in a natural way which they can easily do at home.
In addition
, if every family can join and do it together
such
 as exercise and prepare a healthy diet, it will be a successful sample. In conclusion, even though
people
 start from different reasons and steps, it makes things easier when they do it with groups they share their
experience
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 and
encourage
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 each other.
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