Write a letter to the enrollment officer in a college requesting an exception for joining

Dear Manager I ordered a grey colour Macbook

laptop

through the official Apple website

last

week and it has arrived yesterday.

This

laptop

is for my mother's birthday gift and cost me two thousand dollars.

However

, there was

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hole

on

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package

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when I received it. After

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opened it and checked the

laptop

clearly, I found that the screen has already been damaged and

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can not turn it on. There

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also

some

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on the back of the

laptop

. I already took some pictures and put them in the attachment. Without a doubt, it was

damanged

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damaged

before

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received it.

Hence

, Can I

applyfor

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apply for

a refund for

this

and I will deliver it back to your company? I will send my bank account information in another email. My mother's birthday is next

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so I can not wait for you to change a new one for me. Thank you very much kind regards