The table below shows the consumption of three basic foods (wheat, maize, rice) by people in four different countries.
The diagram provides statistics about
popularity
of three crops,Add an article
the popularity
such
as wheat ,maize
and rice in Cambodia
,Poland
, Egypt
and Mexico. The information is measured in calories per person per day.
The figures show that in Cambodia
the market leader was rice(1445), whereas
in Poland
and Egypt
it was wheat ( 1095 and 865 respectively).The majority of Add a comma
,Egypt
maize
was eaten in Mexico(1083).
Looking into detailes
, Correct your spelling
details
Maize
was second
most popular in Cambodia
and Egypt
(103 and 578 correspondingly). In Mexico and Egypt
the least consumed one was rice(57 and 501 Add a comma
,Egypt
accordingly
),whereas
in Poland
it was Maize
and wheat in Cambodia
.
Overall
, the highest consumption in
calories per person per day across all four countries was of sice in Change preposition
of
Camodia
(1445), Correct your spelling
Cambodia
whereas
the least one was Maize
in Poland
(0). In Egypt
,overall
, the highest amount of crops is consumed ,which is approximately more than 2000 calories per person per day.Submitted by annaosmatesko on
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