Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solutions.
It is indisputable fact that recently, especially in the world of rapid change, youngsters
extremely
keen to Add a missing verb
are extremely
smoke
tobacco which has rapid
tendency Add an article
a rapid
the rapid
of
diseases. Change preposition
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This
essay will presents
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about
the reasons and determines the solutions.
To commence with, there are some reasons that make Change preposition
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adolescences
like to Replace the word
adolescents
smoke
. Firstly
, they are imitating their figures who like to smoke
, resulting in curiousity
and Correct your spelling
curiosity
try
to do the same. Wrong verb form
trying
Secondly
, they want to run away from the
problems, especially related to family problems. Change the word
their
Thus
, smoke
is an alternative way to solve and reduce Wrong verb form
smoking
the
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people
's pain, because smoking will make people
forget all of the pain. Furthermore
, the
young Correct article usage
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people
want to looks
like an adult, so they are trying to Change the verb
look
smoke
and get addicted afterwards.
Another point to consider is the solutions on
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Adolescences
adolescences
should be educated by their close family or friends to stop smoking. Replace the word
adolescents
According to
this
, the influencer must tell the teenager about the disadvantages if they are smoking, like hypertensions
, heart failure, stroke, and Fix the agreement mistake
hypertension
other disease
. Not only educated, but Change the wording
another disease
other diseases
also
motivated its person to reduce the bad habit slowly. For instance
, if they used to smoke
10 times for
each day, the consultant should Change preposition
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motivates
the young Change the verb form
motivate
people
to reduce their habit into
8 times Change preposition
to
for
each day, until they stop smoking. Change preposition
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Last
but not least is to exercise which is the best method to make them forget all of the
Change the word
their
problem
rather than Fix the agreement mistake
problems
smoke
.
To sum up
, the reasons of
smoking are imitating others, trying to leave their problems and wanting to Change preposition
for
looks
older. There are several methods to stop Wrong verb form
look
the
bad actions, like educating and motivating Correct article usage
apply
the
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people
,
and exercising Remove the comma
apply
for
maintain health and release stress.Change preposition
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