Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solutions.

It is indisputable fact that recently, especially in the world of rapid change, youngsters
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keen to
smoke
tobacco which has
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tendency
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diseases.
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the reasons and determines the solutions. To commence with, there are some reasons that make
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like to
smoke
.
Firstly
, they are imitating their figures who like to
smoke
, resulting in
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to do the same.
Secondly
, they want to run away from
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problems, especially related to family problems.
Thus
,
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is an alternative way to solve and reduce
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people
's pain, because smoking will make
people
forget all of the pain.
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young
people
want to
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like an adult, so they are trying to
smoke
and get addicted afterwards. Another point to consider is the solutions
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the problem.
The
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should be educated by their close family or friends to stop smoking.
According to
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, the influencer must tell the teenager about the disadvantages if they are smoking, like
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, heart failure, stroke, and
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. Not only educated, but
also
motivated its person to reduce the bad habit slowly.
For instance
, if they used to
smoke
10 times
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each day, the consultant should
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the young
people
to reduce their habit
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8 times
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each day, until they stop smoking.
Last
but not least is to exercise which is the best method to make them forget all of
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problem
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rather than
smoke
.
To sum up
, the reasons
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smoking are imitating others, trying to leave their problems and wanting to
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look
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older. There are several methods to stop
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bad actions, like educating and motivating
the
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people
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and exercising
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maintain health and release stress.
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