When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Moving to a new
school
can be a nightmare for
students
because they have to adapt to the new
school
routine and different
environment
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. They
also
have to try making
friend
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with other
students
who already know each other or even joined
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peer groups.
However
,
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school
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can help to overcome
this
problem and make the new
students
feel safe through help to introduce them and engage them in a workgroup.
First
of all,
teacher
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plays a great role in introducing new
students
in front of the class.
Hence
, the new
students
do not have to introduce themselves to their classmates one by one.
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can
also
make a fun and creative way during the introduction,
for example
like
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letting other
students
to
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ask one or two things about themselves.
Therefore
, the new
students
will feel safe since their
first
interaction is facilitated by the
teacher
.
Second
of all,
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school
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can help new
students
with
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them
into
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groupwork
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and have the member regularly
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every week. That way,
students
can get the chance to socialise with
every
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each of their classmates within enough time period in terms of
school
assignments. The
teacher
can
also
offer the new student
to
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participate in extracurricular activities. Working in a group will be more effective to help the members befriend rather than just merely being in the same class for years. To sum up, all the new
students
need is to feel safe from awkward situations and accepted by the preexisted student society. Once the teachers understand
this
, the new
students
' adaptation process will not be a scary experience anymore.
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