The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The above visual shows three various

provincial

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Canada

, South

Korea

and

Sweden

's trade

quota

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quotas

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of

men

and

women

in 2005 and 2015. To start with, it is observed that in 2005,

Sweden

was the

first

country in

employment

rates

of both

men

and

women

by 78% and 45%.

however

, South

Korea

stood

next

to

Sweden

by 75% in

male

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employment

ratio

but only with 30

percentage

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of female

employment

it stood

last

. Canadian

employment

rates

for

men

were 61% which is the lowest amongst other countries but

female

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the female

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ratio

of

employment

is 38% which is quite good compared to others. Moving on to

2015

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the 2015

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year, South

Korea

has the highest

rates

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rate

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of

employment

for

man

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a man

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that is

78% and

lowest

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the lowest

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female

employment

rates

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which is 35%. it is noticeable that by 70% of

male

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the male

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employment

ratio

Canada

and

Sweden

is the

second

highest country. on the opposite nearly

by

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5% of

difference

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Canada

stood

next

in

women

's

employment

ratio

and

Sweden

was the

last

country by 50% only. Overall to conclude my point,

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Sweden's

male

employment

ratio

declined in 2015

on the contrary

female

employment

ration

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ratio

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inclined by 8%. in South

Korea

men

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and

women

both

employment

rates

increased

by

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3% to 5%. in 2015 following to

this

Canada

has

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more changes towards increment by 10% to 18% respectively for

men

and

women

's

employment

ratio

in 2015.