A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stray with him/her on your next holiday. You are to busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Thank him/her for the invitation - Explain why you cannot come - - Ask him/her about other time to visit

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Dear Sam How are you and How is your family been doing? I just received your letter and I am so thankful for your heartful invitation

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your wedding.

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, I am really happy for you and your soon-to-be wife Susan.

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I really want to join in

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auspicious event , as you know I recently changed my work job and could not ask for a week off.

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, my company is at its peak phase and I can not leave all the work behind. But, I am planning to visit my family the

summer and trying to save the paid days of vacation. So, I can spend more time there and meet you all.

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, we can plan a small party to celebrate your wedding, where all our school friends can join us.

Lastly

, I am apologizing again for not attending your happiest moment. I hope you both all the success and blessings. Thank you Take care and See you! Yours Faithful Sandeep Kaur

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