A freiend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. th your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Sam, I hope

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letter finds you well So long time no see you and like to see your mother and father. Because they helped me a lot when I was staying in your home. Anyway, yesterday I received a letter from you and regarding the

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letter you asked for my advice about a camping holiday. So I'd like to give you some tips for your upcoming tour.

Firstly

I suggest you to go Kandy mountain for a camping holiday. Because over the place most popular with who's visit for the camping. Because while visiting that place you were met by a beautiful waterfall and some endangered animals. So don't forget to bring a camera with you.

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to try to wear boots when walking over the bush. Because during my

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,visit we met some poisonous snakes over that place.

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, try to bring more water bottles. Because

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top of the mountain difficult to find some water to drink.

Lastly

, I

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would like to join you for that camping holiday. But we need to change the date which you plan before. Because starting I have an urgent exam.

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I'd like to suggest that we can schedule on mid of summer for going that trip. That's all from me. I'm looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Harsha.

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