A freiend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. th your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Sam, I hope
this
letter finds you well So long time no see you and like to see your mother and father. Because they helped me a lot when I was staying in your home. Anyway, yesterday I received a letter from you and regarding the
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letter you asked for my advice about a camping holiday. So I'd like to give you some tips for your upcoming tour.
Firstly
I suggest you to go Kandy mountain for a camping holiday. Because over the place most popular with who's visit for the camping. Because while visiting that place you were met by a beautiful waterfall and some endangered animals. So don't forget to bring a camera with you.
However
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to try to wear boots when walking over the bush. Because during my
last
,visit we met some poisonous snakes over that place.
Also
, try to bring more water bottles. Because
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top of the mountain difficult to find some water to drink.
Lastly
, I
also
would like to join you for that camping holiday. But we need to change the date which you plan before. Because starting I have an urgent exam.
Then
I'd like to suggest that we can schedule on mid of summer for going that trip. That's all from me. I'm looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, Harsha.
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